Philosophy Animations
Were you bored?
The music adds to it
Hannah's voice is animated - really nice voice
You could add icons/stars
Make big words stand out - what is stressed in the voice?
black on white effective
Consider slowing it down, words appear fast in places.
Context - Could be shown on 'bed time' section of children's TV.
Brudenell 100 Website
Navigation boxes - same stroke width as logo
Change colour of football pitch
Can you identify the activities shown?
Improve the darts - Don't look like darts
Improve the pool - Not immediately obvious, add some reference ie. pool cue or lines
Advised to send it to the venue as soon as possible and hope it is promoted.
Make a simple mobile site and encourage people to visit the full site on the desktop.
Hungry Sandwich Club
Good balance with tone of voice - Both professional and characteristic
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