The aim of today is to gain as much feedback on our prototype as we can with a view to act upon this and produce a well-considered and polished product. We designed the prototype in just 5 hours on Friday, and felt that it was most important to have a physically constructed newspaper that people could flick through. We wanted the crit group to look beyond the details of the design and help us evaluate what is and isn't working and where we should be investing our time for the next week.
Feedback:
Page Numbers
Date + Additions
The source
Pullout quote -> Bigger, frame it
Headlines -> Look at leading -> too far apart
Central aligned is fine.
Mix up the images
4 stories per page looks better
Watch the blank space
Sports needs to go at the end
Space between bottom of the page and content
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